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Mountain Peak

When I got the mountain peak
My knees were very weak

But with such beauty before my eyes
I felt as though I was very wise

I had tried so hard to make it to the top
Saying no to the thoughts that told me to stop

Although the journey was so long
Somehow in my heart , I felt so strong

I made it, one step at a time
Telling myself I really must climb

Now no one can take this view from me
There is so much beauty in all I see

The mountain peak
A really good place to seek